2007年杭州市中考英语满分作文范文
假如你叫Liu Mei。前不久，你和来自英国的一位中开云kaiyun(中国)生Allen一起讨论了一个话题：the ways to learn English better。现请你根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍老师Mr Nunan写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。
注意：
1.开头和结尾部分已写好。
2.可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语，使所写内容连贯。
3.所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己的至少三个观点。
4.词数：70个左右。
His ideas
1. reading English newspapers
2. talking with friends in English
3. seeing English films
2007年杭州市中考英语满分作文范文
Mr Nunan,
Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimes seeing English films isn't a bad way.
I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help.
Liu Mei
点评：本文结构非常清楚，第一段阐述了Allen的观点，第二段则是叙述自己的观点。两段中间用“I quite agree with him.”连接起来，显得非常自然。同时作者在阐述自己和别人的观点的时候使用了不同的表达方式，比如 “in his opinion”, “he also believes”, “I think” 等，避免了重复，增加了语言的多样化。本文的衔接非常地成功，比如第二段 “however”, “besides”, “finally” 等连接词使文章显得结构非常地紧凑，读来一气呵成。
假如你叫Liu Mei。前不久，你和来自英国的一位中开云kaiyun(中国)生Allen一起讨论了一个话题：the ways to learn English better。现请你根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍老师Mr Nunan写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。
注意：
1.开头和结尾部分已写好。
2.可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语，使所写内容连贯。
3.所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己的至少三个观点。
4.词数：70个左右。
His ideas
1. reading English newspapers
2. talking with friends in English
3. seeing English films
2007年杭州市中考英语满分作文范文
Mr Nunan,
Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimes seeing English films isn't a bad way.
I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help.
Liu Mei
点评：本文结构非常清楚，第一段阐述了Allen的观点，第二段则是叙述自己的观点。两段中间用“I quite agree with him.”连接起来，显得非常自然。同时作者在阐述自己和别人的观点的时候使用了不同的表达方式，比如 “in his opinion”, “he also believes”, “I think” 等，避免了重复，增加了语言的多样化。本文的衔接非常地成功，比如第二段 “however”, “besides”, “finally” 等连接词使文章显得结构非常地紧凑，读来一气呵成。
