2007年湖南怀化市中考英语满分作文范文
初中阶段的开云kaiyun(中国)习生活即将结束。假设你是张华，身在中考考场，回想自己在父母和师长的关爱和帮助下的成长过程，心中充满感戴之情。请根据表中所列信息，用英语给父母或老师写一封70词左右的短信，表示谢意。
感谢对象：Father Mother Miss Gao
参考用语：take care of, love, help, encourage, cheer up…，thankful, work hard, try to do better…
注意：1. 感谢对象可在父母或老师中任选其一，但请避用真实姓名和校名。
2. 除表格所列关键词语外，还可适当发挥、举例并抒发感受。
3.信的开头和结尾已经给出。
Dear _______________,
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.
2007年湖南怀化市中考英语满分作文范文
Dear Miss Gao,
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.
You’ve taken good care of my studies since I came to this school. When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With your help, I’ve made great progress in English. I’m so thankful for your love that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours
Zhang Hua
点评：作者巧妙地把所有的提示词融入到文章中，完整得叙述了对老师的感激之情以及感激老师的理由。本文衔接自然流畅，前后连贯，层层推进。本文的特点是作者使用了很多复合句， 状语从句，可见作者对初中阶段的句型掌握地还是很扎实的。
初中阶段的开云kaiyun(中国)习生活即将结束。假设你是张华，身在中考考场，回想自己在父母和师长的关爱和帮助下的成长过程，心中充满感戴之情。请根据表中所列信息，用英语给父母或老师写一封70词左右的短信，表示谢意。
感谢对象：Father Mother Miss Gao
参考用语：take care of, love, help, encourage, cheer up…，thankful, work hard, try to do better…
注意：1. 感谢对象可在父母或老师中任选其一，但请避用真实姓名和校名。
2. 除表格所列关键词语外，还可适当发挥、举例并抒发感受。
3.信的开头和结尾已经给出。
Dear _______________,
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.
2007年湖南怀化市中考英语满分作文范文
Dear Miss Gao,
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.
You’ve taken good care of my studies since I came to this school. When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With your help, I’ve made great progress in English. I’m so thankful for your love that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours
Zhang Hua
点评：作者巧妙地把所有的提示词融入到文章中，完整得叙述了对老师的感激之情以及感激老师的理由。本文衔接自然流畅，前后连贯，层层推进。本文的特点是作者使用了很多复合句， 状语从句，可见作者对初中阶段的句型掌握地还是很扎实的。
